Wednesday 29 March 2017

CREATIVE WRITING SKILLS TASK 1B SHORT STORY 1 /3 /7

 Trust 

Once upon a time there was a crazy boy called Peter he was very close to a girl called Debbie ,
Peter was in the year above so they did not talk as much in school as they do out of school but in Debbie's year she had a single girlfriend called Abigail  so she trusted her with all her secrets.
One day Peter told debbie that his relationship with his girlfriend wasn't working and that he probably wanted to get out of it, this was confidential information and he felt he could trust Debbie to keep his secret. Debbie felt this was a dilemma and thought that if she talked it through with Abigail just to get some advice , this was also in confidence and Debbie made this clear to Abi.
Abigail had somehow got some information that Debbie had not told her regarding another of Debbie's friend. Someone had called Abi a thief to Debbie but Debbie did not feel the need to tell Abi as she was already upset and Debbie did not want to make things worse. when she found out she was angry at Debbie so she decided to tell Peters girlfriend about Debbie and Peter being Very close. As Peter and his girlfriend was already going through a rough stage it caused everything to blow up and made things ten times worse. Debbie was put in a very difficult position of who she should choose to stay loyal too. If she is loyal to Abi she looses Peter but if she stays loyal to Peter she looses Abi. if she looses her friendship with Peter its because she has betrayed his trust but if she looses her friendship with Abi its because Abi betrayed her trust. she who does she trust more? Loyalty is a very difficult thing. 
Be careful who you trust!

1 comment:

  1. Very good work here it was good to talk through this dilemma with you good imagination..well done

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