Wednesday 24 May 2017

CREATIVE WRITING SKILLS REDRAFT 24/5/2017


Keep your friends close 

Ryan and Debbie had known each other since high school and up until recently they didn't really talk much,  when they started talking they realised they got on really well they would spend a lot of time talking about different things such as giving Debbie advise on what to do with her home and school situation but was manly just a shoulder to cry on and Ryan would always listen to what Debbie would have to say.What Debbie didn't realise her 'best friend' Anna was watching and taking notes as of what was going on. A few weeks down the line Debbie realised a change in Anna's behaviour, she would act all snappy and moody with Debbie. When she tried talking to Anna about it she would always turn round and say how about you go tell Ryan instead. At the same time what Debbie didn't realise is Anna and Ryan's girlfriend Lucy was getting close and was discussing what Debbie and Ryan talk ,even though its supposed to be a secret so they sat back and planned a way to ruin Debbie and Ryan's friendship.Anna decided that she would make up a loud of lies about Debbie , she would say that she saw Debbie out with another boy and it looked like they were really close, Ryan hit the roof  with Debbie and finished the friendship
 much to Debbie's surprise because she had no idea what he was talking about and didn't know where he was getting his information. While all this was happening Anna just sat back and laughed. Eventually Debbie managed to get Ryan to tell her where he had got his information . Although Debbie now knew the cause of her problem she kept it to herself but decided to keep her distance from Anna , also she decided to just stay friends with Ryan as he did not trust her.
The moral of the story is to keep your friends close and your enemies closer. 

1 comment:

  1. Good story this was a good exercise in you creating a story based on real events it was a good way of finding a stimuli that you could change to suit your story

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