Keep your friends close
Ryan and Debbie had known each other since high school and up until recently they didn't really talk much, when they started talking they realised they got on really well they would spend a lot of time talking about different things such as giving Debbie advise on what to do with her home and school situation but was manly just a shoulder to cry on and Ryan would always listen to what Debbie would have to say.What Debbie didn't realise her 'best friend' Anna was watching and taking notes as of what was going on. A few weeks down the line Debbie realised a change in Anna's behaviour, she would act all snappy and moody with Debbie. When she tried talking to Anna about it she would always turn round and say how about you go tell Ryan instead. At the same time what Debbie didn't realise is Anna and Ryan's girlfriend Lucy was getting close and was discussing what Debbie and Ryan talk about even though its supposed to be a secret so they sat back and planned a way to ruin Debbie and Ryan's friendship.Anna decided that she would make up a loud of lies about Debbie , she would say that she saw Debbie out with another boy and it looked like they were really close, Ryan hit the roof with Debbie and finished the relationship much to Debbie's surprise because she had no idea what he was talking about and didn't know where he was getting his information. While all this was happening Anna just sat back and laughed. Eventually Debbie managed to get Ryan to tell her where he had got his information . Although Debbie now knew the cause of her problem she kept it to herself but decided to keep her distance from Anna , also she decided to just stay friends with Rya as he did not trust her.
The moral of the story is to keep your friends close and your enemies closer.
Good story with a good piece of advice i think that with your ability you could make your stories more exciting and although this is well done i would like you to be a little more creative and explore your imagination a little more.
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